masieh2004
Mechanical
Hello Dear Engineers,
I live in Los Angeles and have about 4 years of experience. So, recently my senior Engineers confirmed that they can serve as a reference for my PE application. I am filling out the forms for them but I need feedback, comments and suggestions to improve the descriptions of the job I performed under them. I know you can say one thing in a lot of different ways and in this application I want to use the most suitable words to make sure that my application does not get rejected. I am copy pasting the job description here. Please give me some tips on how to improve it.
Description of Engineering Tasks & Duties:
(1)Measured Lumens, Color temperature and found the Efficacy of LED Light Fixtures in order to check compatibility with California title 24 and UL lighting requirements.(2)Communicated with vendors to order tools and accessories for the assembly of light fixtures. (3) Measured temperature at different positions of fixture housings to verify if they comply with UL requirements.(4)Modified specification sheets and installation instructions for fixtures
Level of Responsibility:
(1) Inspected and verified the electrical of track fixtures, pendants, rope lights and several other light fixtures before shipping to customers.
(2) Managed UL listing and California title 24 lighting requirements of new developed LED light products.
Description of Engineering Decisions Made:
(1) Verified the electrical and lighting properties of new samples of LED retrofit kits by measuring the current, voltage and wattage using multi meter.
(2) Separated the different color LED retrofit kits based on their color(warm, warm white, white and cool white) by measuring their color temperature.
(3) Assisted the customer service department with basic dimensions, wattage and spec sheets of different light fixtures.
I live in Los Angeles and have about 4 years of experience. So, recently my senior Engineers confirmed that they can serve as a reference for my PE application. I am filling out the forms for them but I need feedback, comments and suggestions to improve the descriptions of the job I performed under them. I know you can say one thing in a lot of different ways and in this application I want to use the most suitable words to make sure that my application does not get rejected. I am copy pasting the job description here. Please give me some tips on how to improve it.
Description of Engineering Tasks & Duties:
(1)Measured Lumens, Color temperature and found the Efficacy of LED Light Fixtures in order to check compatibility with California title 24 and UL lighting requirements.(2)Communicated with vendors to order tools and accessories for the assembly of light fixtures. (3) Measured temperature at different positions of fixture housings to verify if they comply with UL requirements.(4)Modified specification sheets and installation instructions for fixtures
Level of Responsibility:
(1) Inspected and verified the electrical of track fixtures, pendants, rope lights and several other light fixtures before shipping to customers.
(2) Managed UL listing and California title 24 lighting requirements of new developed LED light products.
Description of Engineering Decisions Made:
(1) Verified the electrical and lighting properties of new samples of LED retrofit kits by measuring the current, voltage and wattage using multi meter.
(2) Separated the different color LED retrofit kits based on their color(warm, warm white, white and cool white) by measuring their color temperature.
(3) Assisted the customer service department with basic dimensions, wattage and spec sheets of different light fixtures.