DamsInc:
Differences are based on my normal preparation of Forensic Reports and may not be errors, just differences in the way I prepare stuff:
• The Without Prejudice is buried at the bottom of the page, in the fine print with the third party disclaimer, and could be disqualified by a Court.
• There does not appear to be a legal address for the mall stipulated; I couldn’t even find the province in Canada where the Algo Centre Mall is located. I would have identified it as 151 Ontario Avenue, Elliot Lake, Ontario.
• There does not appear to be a statement that any of the professionals were advised that their work was being reviewed.
• There does not appear to be a statement that any of the professionals were advised that material was retained as evidence for testing to permit them to undertake any other testing.
• There is no disclosure of conflicts. The report was prepared by an architectural firm. The problems may have been architectural and architects in Ontario are self insured. The architect prepared the drawings the engineer sealed.
• There is a lack of consistency in the spelling of the affected firms, and only one or two are correctly identified by their proper legal company name.
• The report was prepared for the Ontario Provincial Police, commonly known as the OPP. Only on the cover page is Ontario Provincial Police noted and no definition of ‘OPP’ is given. For the balance of the report, OPP is used.
• NORR was referrecd to by several names; it did not appear that NORR LIMITED was mentioned.
• Mr. Bryan England, one of the protagonists, was referred to as Brian England as well as Bryan England. There are several other individuals referred to in an imprecise manner.
• There is reference to a W25x100 beam.
• There numerous uses of imprecise wording: “can be said to narrowly meet”, indicated, appears, “the structural portion of the drawings … indicates a layer”, appears, implies, “is probably adequate”. “seems like a reasonable assumption”, “probably accounts for some”, “were almost completely gone”, etc.
• There is no stipulation that either the engineer or architect were registered at the time. The best that comes out, “no OAA license is present although it appears the OAA seals at the time did not include a license number. NORR has no reason to believe that James W. Keywan was not a member of the OAA in good standing at the time of the drawings being issued.”
• There are emotional terms used: victims, tragic, thwarted, etc.
• There are colloquial terms used, including: “…and in some cases the butterfly effect leading to the collapse in 2012…”. This implies some random causality. “It is worth noting”, “It was abundantly clear”, “In other words”, and the winner, “…nipped in the bud.”
• The building code in effect at the time should specifically be mentioned, including any revisions.
• There is a hierarchy of parts to the Ontario building code that is stipulated at the front of the code: Part, Section, Subsection, Article, Sentence, Clause, and Subclause. There is no consistency in the report. Articles were referred to as Sections and Subsections, Sentences were referred to as Subsections, Sentences were referred to as Sections, Articles and Sentences were referred to as Paragraphs and Sections, and the list goes on… maybe a dozen or two.
• There is no consistency in referring to Standards: CAN3 A23.3 should maybe be referred to as CSA Standard A23.3-M77. The reference in the CISC Steel Handbook (in effect at the time) is CSA Standard A23.3-60.
• Reference is made to CISC S16-09 and it should be CISC Steel Handbook, 10th Edition, or CSA Standard S16-09.
There are numerous technical errors… and the list goes on. It would take another page or two…
Dik