If I recall rightly, a vortex breaker's purpose is not to "straighten" the flow profile into the suction case, it is a device used in the sump or the tank to prevent vortexes forming on the surface and drawing air bubbles down into the suction line and creating havoc when the bubbles "recollapse". Nothing shown in this installation would suggest the need for a vortex breaker.
Maybe the consultant is demanding a flow straightener, or as many in the HVAC market would call it, a suction diffuser. These are used on for installations such as a crowded mechanical room in a building with suction line dropping from ceiling and turning 90 degrees sharply into the suction inlet of the pump. MANY pump design engineers have questioned any benefit gained by these devices, but the manufacturers and the contractors who pad their bill like them a lot!
The pump manufacterer should definitely be asked their opinion.
I would absolutely have the consultant provide a technical justification for his demand. I would ask him to:
1. explain exactly what piece of equipment he is demanding, and what function it performs.
2. explain in detail what it is he sees in the system that requires needing this.
If he gives you some mularkey about swirling flow inside the pump causing cavitation or erosion, he either doesn't know what he's talking about, he's lazy, or he's on the take; possibly all three.