Requesting input to Engineering Observation Letter

[MCORTEZ]

I have drafted up a sample letter that I intend to use in the future. Any feedback would be appreciated, especially with verbage. I would like to ensure the letter sounds as porfessional as possible.
Thank you in advance.

 

[Gr8blu]

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https://www.eng-tips.com/viewthread.cfm?qid=502235

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