I'm making some video tutorials for SIEMENS NX. Please give me some feedback. 1

[F. S. Farimani]

Hello everyone,

I'm trying to use my lockdown time to make some video tutorials for SIEMENS NX. I just baked the first part over here:

[URL unfurl="true"]https://youtu.be/l3zWEa4-zQ0[/url]

I would appreciate it if you could take a look and give me some constructive feedback. Thanks for your support in advance.

 

[opetrenko1]

I watched fragments of your tutorial at about 10 time spots for about 15 seconds.
IMHO: Your English is good, but too low information density. 75% of words could be dropped, video reduced to 10 min, if not 5.